Once upon a time there was an evil caterpiller named Will. he was not nice at all, but he was really really mean. but the only reason he was mean is because he was fat. so then he went on a diet and got really skinny and nice. then he had an idea to sell his diet plan to other caterpillers. so when he was becoming very sucsesfull in the dietary buisness he bought a sports car and put pattents on the most common words in the english language. and then he started working out and he worked out so much that he died because heis muscles got too big and exploded.
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that was very interesting story you wrote i liked it because it's not somthing you read every day and it's somthing that you would right good job......:)
Hey homes. lol dude! I laughed at lhis for like five minutes straight!!! It's SOOOOO funny.... It's kinda pointless because do cattrpillars really need sports cars? lol!!!! Dude, this was AWESOME!!!!!! lollolololololololol!!!1!!!! I love u, dde! This is great! PEACE!
:D Emily
this is really good patrick. you are such a great writer. that was sad that the caterpillar's muscules exploded. its funny cuz when i read this i could just imagine you reading this out loud. again nice job
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