Thursday, March 20, 2008
My Golfball
on thursday i found a golfball. its very white, kidalike snow except not as cold. my golfball bounces so high, i think my ball can fly. my golf golfball says“high trajectory” on it, but i dont know whut that means. when i have my golfball it seems like life is swell. i think that my golfball is cooler than your golfball. my golfball has a red number 2 on it. my golfball makes me feel special. i’ll never give away my golfball, never, ever, never not ever.
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I like this entry because it gives good detail.so you will never give away our golf ball. what if it plit in half. i hope you find more goflballs.
This is HILARIOUS! You really love that golfball. I've seen you with your golf ball and i can tell you have some true love for your golfball. I like this because you have true love for your golfball. Have Fun you to!
Uhm.. wow... This is different. lol I like this because it gives good detain and it was FUNNEH! lol. I wonder if there was a hidden meaning behind
ur golf balls. lol. Keep up with ur funny stories!
:D Emily
Nice Patrick! I like this because you were very descriptive with what you were describing (your golf ball.) I also loved how you rhymed.I thought that was very creative. Cool entry! Anyways, I think your entries and also very entertaining and funny. I like them a lot! Keep up the good work! Nice job!
Cool. I like this post BECAUSE you have a golf-ball. it rhymed like a poem. it was good. it was delicious.
i like this because you tell what it exactly looks like.
i liked this because it was funny. is this the golfball that i took from you? i wish i had a golfball that was that cool. do you still have your golfball? do you thing that you will ever play golf with your golfball?
I Thought your entry is very weird. I was confused on why you wrote about a golf ball. Ok then.
I love this story about your golf ball because you explained why you love it and what it looks and feels like. Do you still have your golf ball? I love reading your stories because there so creative each and every one of them is very creative. I think one day you should do short stories for kids. I hope you keep writing good job.
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